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In a name
Of course I wouldn't recommend it. It's
Pitch black outside
Honey. Don't go searching for me for
I know Im never
Ever to be found.
(written for the 'In a name' competition)
Pitch black outside
Honey. Don't go searching for me for
I know Im never
Ever to be found.
(written for the 'In a name' competition)
Published 11th May 2012
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11th May 2012 12:37pm
12th May 2012 7:35am
Ophie
OMG. The first read was overwhelming.
To an extent beyond which I could not
comprehend. So I simply drifted off.
Am here for the third time.
Still the same effect.
As good as it gets.
Curtsy,
Sumeet
OMG. The first read was overwhelming.
To an extent beyond which I could not
comprehend. So I simply drifted off.
Am here for the third time.
Still the same effect.
As good as it gets.
Curtsy,
Sumeet
12th May 2012 9:54am
thank you sumeet :) although it worries me a little about the 'still same effect' bit!
12th May 2012 10:59am
12th May 2012 2:39pm
i won't deserve it. Cthonian and Sumeet's poems were much richer than mine.
thanks a lot for your time and comment :)
thanks a lot for your time and comment :)
18th May 2012 4:55am
Does "never ever to be found" mean that you are escaping something, don't really want to be found and/or you consistently find yourself, by another or others, but then you feel smoothered and lose yourself? Or none of the above? I like your poetry very much but can't help wondering how much of it is your persona or how much is really you. Great job.
18th May 2012 10:05am
Im afraid i can't really answer myself because I don't know the answer to your last question
Thanks for stopping by :)
Thanks for stopping by :)
