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in nooning
my warm, wet n naked petals
were caressed by his prickly skin,
by pushing and stroking
he sampled my little river,
the noon filled with
seductive whispers,
i accepted an unheard invitation
n two people merged into one
too deep, too close N
a slow, soft, honest, waterfall of passion
broke with torrents...
were caressed by his prickly skin,
by pushing and stroking
he sampled my little river,
the noon filled with
seductive whispers,
i accepted an unheard invitation
n two people merged into one
too deep, too close N
a slow, soft, honest, waterfall of passion
broke with torrents...
Published 5th Jul 2024
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5th Jul 2024 7:41am
Hot wet passionate piece. Some people might question the aptness of the title "in the eve" when the session took place at noon (mid day).
5th Jul 2024 9:09am
hey ss
yes you are right... will correct it, thanks for bringing it to my attention...
yes you are right... will correct it, thanks for bringing it to my attention...
5th Jul 2024 9:21am
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5th Jul 2024 2:01pm
You deserve a nooner that last all night and day long of the next morning. Enjoy orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing my strong smart beautiful sexy woman.
6th Jul 2024 12:35pm
6th Jul 2024 12:04pm
So charmingly hot! From beginning to end, you conveyed a sense of quiet satisfaction, amid the torrents of passion.
6th Jul 2024 12:34pm
6th Jul 2024 1:30pm
Such tender and beautiful words...a perfect picture of loving...thanks for sharing. Hugs and love, Oral
6th Jul 2024 2:44pm
