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Envy
I envy
the sea breeze;
how it
caresses her
beautifully.
the sea breeze;
how it
caresses her
beautifully.
Author's Note
I reworded this from an old 10w piece I initially wrote on Hellopoetry. I don’t remember if I took that writing down or not. This is basically the same thing with a couple words altered.
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4th Jul 2024 11:16pm
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6th Jul 2024 9:18pm
Brilliant write. Sometimes less is more. Really dig this. Appreciate you.
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7th Jul 2024 5:13pm