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Crickets
Crickets outside
quiet,
blushingly listening
to her
unbridled
melodious
moans
quiet,
blushingly listening
to her
unbridled
melodious
moans
Published 3rd Jul 2024
Author's Note
Another 10w attempt, much more suggestive
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3rd Jul 2024 2:11pm
Ooh, I like this!
I really like how you challenge yourself with these 10 word poems. Very provocative and excellent with the minimalism while keeping them erotic.
I really like how you challenge yourself with these 10 word poems. Very provocative and excellent with the minimalism while keeping them erotic.
3rd Jul 2024 4:47pm
