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There’s a 1 in an 8 billion chance,
That if you stick your hand in the wall,
You’ll go between atoms and your hand will go right through
I used to think that was a huge number,
An impossible chance
Until I reached for you to stay,
And you kept walking,
My hand fades through yours.
That if you stick your hand in the wall,
You’ll go between atoms and your hand will go right through
I used to think that was a huge number,
An impossible chance
Until I reached for you to stay,
And you kept walking,
My hand fades through yours.
Published 29th Jun 2024
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29th Jun 2024 3:45am
29th Jun 2024 10:14am
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This is a little gem isn’t it… happy days.
I love the conciseness of the thought here. How callous and cold people can be in their separations and treatments of other human beings. I love the blending of science with the implausibility of human behaviour.
Yep… I liked this a lot. Thank you for sharing.
-M
This is a little gem isn’t it… happy days.
I love the conciseness of the thought here. How callous and cold people can be in their separations and treatments of other human beings. I love the blending of science with the implausibility of human behaviour.
Yep… I liked this a lot. Thank you for sharing.
-M
