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The Grey of the Artic
The depth in the slate of natural rippling glass
Deceiving of its strength to hold
Inviting to tempt fate and step in
I see the weeping of the snow queen tears rests on your shoulders
Beautifully sad in her cold blessing of droplets that have dried leaving a white coat to last until she weeps again.
Deceiving of its strength to hold
Inviting to tempt fate and step in
I see the weeping of the snow queen tears rests on your shoulders
Beautifully sad in her cold blessing of droplets that have dried leaving a white coat to last until she weeps again.
Author's Note
I came up with this reading Littledragonfly's Artic Grey poem. Was inspired.
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Re. The Grey of the Artic
Anonymous
26th Jun 2024 9:24pm
This kind of had Narnia vibes and I’m here for it. If you see the guy with the hooves through the wardrobe, tell him I said hi. 🙃
Thanks for sharing
-M
Thanks for sharing
-M
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26th Jun 2024 10:20pm
Really nice and imaginative with a touch of sadness. Inspiration is always a great impetus for writing.
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27th Jun 2024 1:14pm
I agree with you. I take it as a compliment when it happens to me. Thank you Duende <3