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Public Restrooms
How do you feed your fish?
As you swim in that bowl of dish
From within or on others' wish?
Splish, splash, squash, squish!
Throw your waste
On their face
Or inside the sewage base
A mud puddle
Or airborne hurdle?
Everyone has
Their tales to tell
Let the baggage pass
C'mon, life is swell!
Let's not muddle
Others peripheral view
All in all, we all stumble!
Don't be hostile
Let us all be civil!
Share a cracker,
and keep the toilet clean!
As you swim in that bowl of dish
From within or on others' wish?
Splish, splash, squash, squish!
Throw your waste
On their face
Or inside the sewage base
A mud puddle
Or airborne hurdle?
Everyone has
Their tales to tell
Let the baggage pass
C'mon, life is swell!
Let's not muddle
Others peripheral view
All in all, we all stumble!
Don't be hostile
Let us all be civil!
Share a cracker,
and keep the toilet clean!
Published 19th Jun 2024
Author's Note
This didn't go as I planned... but had fun writing to see where it lead me!
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19th Jun 2024 8:10am
19th Jun 2024 8:16am
Liked what...?
Hopefully not the poo that hurdle...
Thanks for reading my poem and the like!
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Hopefully not the poo that hurdle...
Thanks for reading my poem and the like!
♡
19th Jun 2024 10:53am
20th Jun 2024 5:39am
19th Jun 2024 4:52pm
20th Jun 2024 5:40am
19th Jun 2024 4:57pm
An interesting read. Your public restroom sounds a bit like an exercise in avoidance. A lot of things I want to streer clear of.... and I def don't want to be sharing crackers in there.
This felt very...you, Te. Ejoyable little write. Well done.
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This felt very...you, Te. Ejoyable little write. Well done.
🙂
20th Jun 2024 5:44am
I guess it is me...
in a cliche but I had fun writing it.
Definitely,
You know one time I made the stupid decision of sitting down on one without looking or cleaning it...
And there were bright yellow pee allover...
And it left a bright red rash on my rear...
Horrible.
Thanks for your visit.
♡
in a cliche but I had fun writing it.
Definitely,
You know one time I made the stupid decision of sitting down on one without looking or cleaning it...
And there were bright yellow pee allover...
And it left a bright red rash on my rear...
Horrible.
Thanks for your visit.
♡
20th Jun 2024 1:22am
This was such a fun and funny and clever read. You bring up some important points here. LOL
John
John
20th Jun 2024 5:46am
Thanks John.
Haha,
I wanted to have a little light fun in this.
I'm glad you think so as well.
I appreciate your comments
♡
Haha,
I wanted to have a little light fun in this.
I'm glad you think so as well.
I appreciate your comments
♡
