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Dreadful Dream
Immobile
You are a telegram projection, single
A singular being of warmth
cold,
all your worth
sense of existence
in a wonder of persistence
everything in one
yet nothing you are none
and not a nun
Godless
Souless
Or soulful
but just woeful
Sense of being
In the dream of seeing
Conscious tension
In momentary suspension
It trickles down
.
.
.
From mind to envision:
The screams-
sound of high pitched vibration
cries of anxiety
Voices-
of women,men, old and young
yelling, laughing, talking
All in a smoke of yellow
blue how it'd swallow
your whole being...
engulfed in a vibrant scene
Immobile
Anxious
Sense of dread
Center of gravity
In the middle of chest
It's a black hole
That eats whole
Spiraling away
Feel the guilt
As you tilt
Then twist into warped time
Within you a world of crime
So true
And imbue
All that you fear
Dejected, into tattoo smear
Scar into waking squeal
(internally)
Have you slept like this?
Published 18th Jun 2024
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18th Jun 2024 10:09am
18th Jun 2024 10:14am
Thank you so much LJ!
I appreciate your feedback and time into reading this little write!
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I appreciate your feedback and time into reading this little write!
♡
18th Jun 2024 12:47pm
19th Jun 2024 5:45am
Thank you so much for your feedback!
Me too...
But sometimes they come in the dreams
I find them interesting how this played out though..
New experiences everyday!
♡
Me too...
But sometimes they come in the dreams
I find them interesting how this played out though..
New experiences everyday!
♡
18th Jun 2024 8:02pm
I have spent many days and nights like this. I know it well. This is a powerful write and a window into your inner feelings.
Just remember to trust your heart cuz you have a really good one. I can tell. You know Ive told you this. There is a real goodness in you that you exude.
You every need to vent, want some insight or just a cheerleader, you know where I'm at. I got you.
Wishing you peace Te.
🙂
Just remember to trust your heart cuz you have a really good one. I can tell. You know Ive told you this. There is a real goodness in you that you exude.
You every need to vent, want some insight or just a cheerleader, you know where I'm at. I got you.
Wishing you peace Te.
🙂
19th Jun 2024 5:47am
Thank you so much Rob.
I appreciate your compliment and encouragement,
And reassurance.
And also your kind gesture!
♡
I appreciate your compliment and encouragement,
And reassurance.
And also your kind gesture!
♡
20th Jun 2024 1:20am
You have painted the darkness of some dreams with the exquisite skill of a poet whose gift can both sigh and scream. This poem has such wonderful hues of an unsettled spirit that evoke the soul of a banshee woman who knows what she is doing and can make it come alive for the reader. Art at its finest can make one step out of ones comfort zone. This does that in spades, my friend.
John
John
20th Jun 2024 5:48am
Your compliment means so much to me.
Thank you very much, John...!
It was pretty unsettling,
I'm glad Inwas able to accomplish it with this...
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Thank you very much, John...!
It was pretty unsettling,
I'm glad Inwas able to accomplish it with this...
♡
