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Too Much
Is what I said too much?
Did I respond too much?
Am I clinging too much?
Is just being too much.?
How much is too much?
If I gave you the mile when you wanted an inch
If I gave you a smile when you wanted a grin
I talked you to death when you only wanted a peak in
I bought you a cake when you just wanted the cherry with the stem
I cannot figure out all these in’s when you want out
Or you want out when I let you too far in
Sinking in quicksand
Slower than water
Needing water
Can’t go any further
Too much
Did I respond too much?
Am I clinging too much?
Is just being too much.?
How much is too much?
If I gave you the mile when you wanted an inch
If I gave you a smile when you wanted a grin
I talked you to death when you only wanted a peak in
I bought you a cake when you just wanted the cherry with the stem
I cannot figure out all these in’s when you want out
Or you want out when I let you too far in
Sinking in quicksand
Slower than water
Needing water
Can’t go any further
Too much
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Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:01pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 6:42pm
I think you are just enough.
Vulnerable spill, I like the opposing actions.
Vulnerable spill, I like the opposing actions.
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Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:03pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:04pm
Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:42pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:07pm
Listen Cuzzo. This guy needs to hit the bricks. Sounds like he don't know what he wants and aint nobody got time for that.
"Life is too short to be trying to play some games. Take some time and think about, is it really worth losing me" - Mary J
That's a smart woman.
Good write fam.
"Life is too short to be trying to play some games. Take some time and think about, is it really worth losing me" - Mary J
That's a smart woman.
Good write fam.
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Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:43pm
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15th Jun 2024 8:17pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:22pm
Live and learn, then move on. Life isn't all cherries. Sometimes it's just those stems. lol
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Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 7:44pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 8:28pm
There are conversations so plain and there are other speeches better than poems..
I like this speeched poem, so realistic the way you placed it and presented it..
NIce work ..Fia
I like this speeched poem, so realistic the way you placed it and presented it..
NIce work ..Fia
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Re: Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 9:29pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 8:44pm
That dichotomy between feeling like too much & too little simultaneously is such a bug bear. The way you convey that here is amazing
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15th Jun 2024 9:30pm
Re. Too Much
15th Jun 2024 10:50pm
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15th Jun 2024 10:59pm
Re. Too Much
16th Jun 2024 00:57am
Re: Re. Too Much
16th Jun 2024 1:09am
Re. Too Much
16th Jun 2024 2:18am
The emotion and vulnerability you created here is amazing. Each word means so much. Nicely executed.
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Re: Re. Too Much
16th Jun 2024 2:47am
Re. Too Much
16th Jun 2024 7:36am
I've wondered this too: am I too much, too sensitive, too understanding etc. Until someone told me there's no such thing as too (much of everyting) Great write, Fia. xo
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17th Jun 2024 1:37am