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Love can be quite painful
Love is all around
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
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Re. Love can be quite painful
15th Jun 2024 11:12am
Love love love this.
Anyone who can compare love
to a serial killer and make it work
is awesome!
Anyone who can compare love
to a serial killer and make it work
is awesome!
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Re: Re. Love can be quite painful
15th Jun 2024 11:14am
Awesome! Glad you enjoyed this poem. There are those similarities. No doubt. Appreciate the comments.
Re. Love can be quite painful
15th Jun 2024 11:27am
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15th Jun 2024 11:45am
Re. Love can be quite painful
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Re. Love can be quite painful
15th Jun 2024 12:59pm
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Re. Love can be quite painful
15th Jun 2024 6:12pm
I get this! Been on the receiving end more than my share. Excellent spill.
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15th Jun 2024 6:15pm
Re. Love can be quite painful
16th Jun 2024 00:58am
Re: Re. Love can be quite painful
16th Jun 2024 2:06am
Re. Love can be quite painful
16th Jun 2024 9:36am
The way you succeed in creating adorable poems on the darkest topics will never stop to surprise me! Great job!
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16th Jun 2024 10:49am