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The Foe We Have To Fight '' Sonnet ''
I am not your foe, but ignorance is
like a random shot, the darkness it hits
and so learn the principles and their ABC's
they soften the heart, they brighten the wits
I am not your foe, arrogance can be
like flying higher without any wing
but, heed, if the truth of the sun blinds thee
as too much pride hides the light as you sing
I'll not be your foe, but your mindset will
like shackles that pull you away from me
and so you have learned to hold the quill
nothing's thicker than ink of poetry-
I' m your friend regardless of any claim
any belief, any place, time or name
like a random shot, the darkness it hits
and so learn the principles and their ABC's
they soften the heart, they brighten the wits
I am not your foe, arrogance can be
like flying higher without any wing
but, heed, if the truth of the sun blinds thee
as too much pride hides the light as you sing
I'll not be your foe, but your mindset will
like shackles that pull you away from me
and so you have learned to hold the quill
nothing's thicker than ink of poetry-
I' m your friend regardless of any claim
any belief, any place, time or name
Published 14th Jun 2024
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14th Jun 2024 8:49pm
This is really good. Trying to get my thoughts together for a sonnet. Enjoyed this. Fia xoxo
All the accolade goes to my friends who help me overcome the fears
of getting bad feedbacks, or commented at all..
thanks again, stay safe happy and active......
its all about syllables counts , not very big deal.
of getting bad feedbacks, or commented at all..
thanks again, stay safe happy and active......
its all about syllables counts , not very big deal.
15th Jun 2024 9:24am
15th Jun 2024 1:01pm
Much thanks dear Sam,
I highly value this feedback, from a great pen..
Happiness and success always.
I highly value this feedback, from a great pen..
Happiness and success always.
16th Jun 2024 11:15am
16th Jun 2024 11:22am
I am very pleased you liked this little scribble; LDF.
always nice from you to read and comment.
God Bless! my friend.
always nice from you to read and comment.
God Bless! my friend.
