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in the quiet stillness of the night
touch
my darkness
kiss
my numbness
find out
my weakness
before going on a trip...
my darkness
kiss
my numbness
find out
my weakness
before going on a trip...
Published 14th Jun 2024
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2024 1:04pm
Before going on a trip to dreamland. Well done, Dimpy. Sometimes gentle care is the most important thing one can do for another.
14th Jun 2024 1:11pm
journey from gentle care to going wild feels like heaven... well thanks tim for constant appreciation...
Anonymous
14th Jun 2024 1:14pm
It's always a pleasure to bathe in a beautiful woman's thoughts when she's a poetess like you, Dimp. :)
14th Jun 2024 1:21pm
Anonymous
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14th Jun 2024 2:27pm
haha, I can't help it, you keep getting me foamed up. ;)
14th Jun 2024 5:33pm
Anonymous
14th Jun 2024 5:34pm
You're good at your job. :))))))
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14th Jun 2024 1:57pm
Where is he going?! If I were you I’d lock the door and keep him touching and kissing
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14th Jun 2024 2:06pm
My simplest summary of the message is "let's make probing love before you go away". A request I would say yes to.
14th Jun 2024 5:44pm
Aww yes :)
actually i should have used the word "ride" instead of trip....was about sex ride...
actually i should have used the word "ride" instead of trip....was about sex ride...
15th Jun 2024 6:50am
That changes the perspective, I reinterpret it as playing about before "going in".
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14th Jun 2024 5:47pm
Oh Dimpy
It's so sensual and tempting
Perhaps just the right amount of spice for lust
It's so sensual and tempting
Perhaps just the right amount of spice for lust
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14th Jun 2024 6:34pm
I wanted touch your sexy body all over making sure you are filled with pleasure and enjoying orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2024 7:11pm
There's a lot being said in this short beauty. And a lot left to the imagination. Very nice!
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