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Why am I still here
Danced with death so many times
Last ticket to ride

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 14th Jun 2024

#death #haiku #TruthOfLife

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Thor_Azine

14th Jun 2024 11:57am

Good dance partners are hard to find, maybe that's why.

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Vision_of_insanity

14th Jun 2024 11:59am

Possibly, maybe. Who knows
Thanks for reading

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AfterSexDilemma

14th Jun 2024 12:46pm

It's all about the experience, not the consequences:D

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Vision_of_insanity

14th Jun 2024 12:50pm

Yes it is. Life is short, play hard!

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PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)

14th Jun 2024 1:43pm

Sometimes the sun gets lost in the landscape. PAR

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Vision_of_insanity

14th Jun 2024 1:47pm

Great point PAR. Thank you for the comments

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deliabear (Debbie)

14th Jun 2024 2:06pm

The ride's not up. Death will get you in its own time.
My thoughts, lol 😆
You haiku's are refreshing today

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Vision_of_insanity

14th Jun 2024 2:14pm

Thank you Debbie. Did you read yesterday's stories I wrote?

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deliabear (Debbie)

14th Jun 2024 2:20pm

I read the ones in the morning. Might have missed ones later in the day. I'll look.

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Vision_of_insanity

14th Jun 2024 2:21pm

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CasketSharpe

16th Jun 2024 1:06am

Try a refund.

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Vision_of_insanity

16th Jun 2024 2:04am

Could of, but not in this poem.

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