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Ode to Innocense (sonnet)

Oh half remembered, fleeting, happy time,
When nothing mattered more than love and play,
Imagination was then in its prime,
And life began anew with every day.
 
A flower was then a joy, a mystery,
And not a petal, root and simple stem,
And life was full of wondrous fantasy,
Untainted by the intellect of man.
 
That time is gone now; it cannot return,
The fruit's been swallowed; its slow poison kills,
And yet my fallen heart will always yearn,
For that most happy time of unknown skills.
 
Oh false god, knowledge, daily you destroy,
All that was holy in me as a boy!
Written by VictorDLopez (Victor D. Lopez)
Published | Edited 13th Jun 2024
Author's Note
This is one of the first sonnets I wrote in a Shakespeare class as an undergraduate when my favorite professor noted after reading several sonnets that we should try to write a Shakespearean sonnet to fully appreciate the difficulty of working within the constraints of a set rhyme scheme, ten-syllable lines, a volta in the third quatrain and a final couplet. I immediately began writing the above and was done in 15 minutes as Dr. Miller continued his lecture. I never showed it to him as I did it just to see if I could. Four decades and many sonnets later, it is still one of my favorites.
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