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“Good Girl”
Good girls are bred to please.
Say “Yes sir”
while on your knees.
Open wide
don’t make a sound
your wrists and ankles
will be bound;
Don’t get me wrong
you might enjoy
when daddy uses you
as his toy;
He just may take you
across his knees
to spank your ass
till you say please,
but it’s not your safe word
so he will continue,
never to break,
but to only bend you;
Different positions,
in a different place..
Daddy likes when tears
streak your face;
What a beautiful sight to see,
spread wide for daddy,
he’s full of glee.
It’s always an adventure
to see what he will do next.
Pleasure,
Torment,
and violent sex.
But remember, if daddy says
you cannot cum,
you mustn’t pout,
when he is done.
Good girls are bred to never say no.
But you like that, don’t you?
You’ll do anything to please daddy,
Won’t you?
Good girl.
When he calls you his “good girl”
How does it make you feel?
Are you willing to do things, against your will?
At his beck and call,
following his demand;
Can you submit to him?
Will you force his hand?
Or will you disobey him just for discipline?
Good girl.
When he calls you his “good girl”
your nipples harden,
much like his grip around your neck,
your pussy drips..
Yearning for the moment
he lets you cum,
Stars dance around your vision,
or is it the sun?
Your muscles clench,
his balls tighten,
with slippery bodies,
your senses heightened.
The feeling is euphoric,
The orgasms building.
He’s feeling charitable,
Daddy says “let go”
and it’s so thrilling..
you cum around him
literally exploding
thankful for daddy’s mercy..
You’ve been a good girl,
so you get rewarded…
- Poetic Gawdess
Say “Yes sir”
while on your knees.
Open wide
don’t make a sound
your wrists and ankles
will be bound;
Don’t get me wrong
you might enjoy
when daddy uses you
as his toy;
He just may take you
across his knees
to spank your ass
till you say please,
but it’s not your safe word
so he will continue,
never to break,
but to only bend you;
Different positions,
in a different place..
Daddy likes when tears
streak your face;
What a beautiful sight to see,
spread wide for daddy,
he’s full of glee.
It’s always an adventure
to see what he will do next.
Pleasure,
Torment,
and violent sex.
But remember, if daddy says
you cannot cum,
you mustn’t pout,
when he is done.
Good girls are bred to never say no.
But you like that, don’t you?
You’ll do anything to please daddy,
Won’t you?
Good girl.
When he calls you his “good girl”
How does it make you feel?
Are you willing to do things, against your will?
At his beck and call,
following his demand;
Can you submit to him?
Will you force his hand?
Or will you disobey him just for discipline?
Good girl.
When he calls you his “good girl”
your nipples harden,
much like his grip around your neck,
your pussy drips..
Yearning for the moment
he lets you cum,
Stars dance around your vision,
or is it the sun?
Your muscles clench,
his balls tighten,
with slippery bodies,
your senses heightened.
The feeling is euphoric,
The orgasms building.
He’s feeling charitable,
Daddy says “let go”
and it’s so thrilling..
you cum around him
literally exploding
thankful for daddy’s mercy..
You’ve been a good girl,
so you get rewarded…
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 9th Jun 2024
Author's Note
This is my take on a sub/dom relationship. I have no experience in either, but this was a fun piece to work on and only for your smut pleasure, so ENJOY!!! xoxo :*
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9th Jun 2024 7:42am
Very stimulating read, for not have being experienced in either you said, you captured it with vivid imagery! Very well done
9th Jun 2024 2:17pm
Thank you so much, Mid!! I am so happy I was able to paint vivid imagery for you guys.
xoxo,
~P.G
xoxo,
~P.G
9th Jun 2024 10:45am
9th Jun 2024 2:18pm
9th Jun 2024 5:48pm
Hello and thank you for sharing this magnificent poem!!!!! I've literally joined DUP to tell you I love this writing. How would you feel about my embroidering it on a pillow for my personal use with you credited? Certainly if you are not ok with that I will not.
9th Jun 2024 7:29pm
Thank you so much!! Also welcome to DUP! You’re going to love it here. I do not mind at all, just please when you’ve done it show me!!! I’d love to see it!
Look forward to hearing from you.
xoxo,
~P.G💋
Look forward to hearing from you.
xoxo,
~P.G💋
9th Jun 2024 9:12pm
14th Jun 2024 10:54pm
Favorite
you cum around him
literally exploding
Adding
His pulsing cock
In you forboding
I like what you write
you cum around him
literally exploding
Adding
His pulsing cock
In you forboding
I like what you write
16th Jun 2024 12:44pm
👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 queen very erotic sensual and dominating great 👍 ink spill 👏 queen!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
