A Skeleton Hanging In A Pig Pen

Ok, have you read ‘Tender is the Flesh’ ? It’s the most monstrous post-apocalyptic cannibalism book I’ve ever been haunted by and the way you show the dehumanization of a body through age just resonated on that wavelength.

You are fucking fire. Your analogies are goddamn pristine. I need a keyboard. I need to scream about this.

Right here:
I once had vivid flesh,
muscles, ligaments and pigment
that tied me to earth's beasts


VIVID FLESH… fuck?! Yes!
Pigment?!
You have faded from the world’s nurture. The metaphor gets me hard it’s so hot.

Then the spill to the finale, the doom of being food, prey, helpless.

To not be able to look away?! No eyelids.

(primal scream)

Yes!

Fuck it up, Blondie

(I don’t know what color hair you have, I just wanted to say that.)

Great shit

If you say I'm blonde then blondie I am, you mention 'tender is the flesh', I read a synopsis, as in I will read, not as in I have read and then that reading will stop there because I've never read a book in my life and if I do it will be the lord of the rings, if I am fire you're the flame fanner and what I've seen from you earlier today when I checked out your page, a forest ablaze yourself, I will be reading more certainly, a real poet I seem to be talking to, a real one to be sure.         For real, real though, thank you muchly, this comment you've just given me will keep me writing another couple weeks easily, I do appreciate it Betty, Betty like white, Betty like Cooper, Betty like bet that she's a trooper, I'm tickled.

Nice write. Appreciate you.





DL

Thank you, welcome to D.U.