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A Doomed State

Twilight Zone has arrived
People are drugged fueled zombies
No recovery
Vision_of_insanity
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 10:40am
Time to get out the salt... nice crisp write...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 10:41am
Yes!!. Thank you LDF
Vision_of_insanity
Re. A Doomed State
(Debbie)
7th Jun 2024 11:54am
An alternate reality sounds great right about now.
Cool haiku
deliabear
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Re: Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 12:03pm
Thanks my friend!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 1:46pm
I got it!
TheOralizer
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Re: Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 2:36pm
Thank you my friend.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. A Doomed State
Anonymous
7th Jun 2024 3:19pm
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Anonymous
Re: Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 3:20pm
Oh so true. Thank you!!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. A Doomed State
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
7th Jun 2024 8:40pm
Very well done! Love this!
faithmairee
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Re: Re. A Doomed State
7th Jun 2024 10:50pm
Thank you Faith
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. A Doomed State
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
7th Jun 2024 11:06pm
My pleasure!
faithmairee
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