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Trapped Within
The child inside is terrified
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing his mind
Stop wasting his time
Love and understanding
Vital to his fragile existence
Misshapen intent
Quick to doubt
An injustice
Afraid to feel
A silent crime
Killing his mind
Stop wasting his time
Love and understanding
Vital to his fragile existence
Published 6th Jun 2024
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6th Jun 2024 4:39pm
Love and understanding is vital to all our complex but fragile existence's.
Hard.to be trapped inside without it.
Strong ending.
Hard.to be trapped inside without it.
Strong ending.
6th Jun 2024 5:09pm
Thanks for the reminder of where the real battle originates..."As a man thinks, so is he" (Plato). Hugs and love, Oral
6th Jun 2024 11:00pm
7th Jun 2024 00:50am
Wow. This is really deep. I love where you went with it. Very powerful piece.
7th Jun 2024 10:02am
7th Jun 2024 11:29am
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