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Redeemed
There is a splendid devastation in your departure,
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria.
The annihilated ache feels quite glorious
Beneath the dominion of your desire,
all inhibition perishes in my heart's brilliant fires.
You crossed the throbbing threshold
from my body into my soul's dream.
A heroin of deep peace drugs my bloodstream.
Your vow of lust is redeemed.
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria.
The annihilated ache feels quite glorious
Beneath the dominion of your desire,
all inhibition perishes in my heart's brilliant fires.
You crossed the throbbing threshold
from my body into my soul's dream.
A heroin of deep peace drugs my bloodstream.
Your vow of lust is redeemed.
Author's Note
Photo by Alex Grey
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Re. Redeemed
2nd Jun 2024 1:01pm
Felt this
"There is a splendid devastation in your departure,
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria"
Love the poem Fia xoxo
"There is a splendid devastation in your departure,
knowing your return will be a heart exploding euphoria"
Love the poem Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. Redeemed
2nd Jun 2024 1:04pm
Hi Fia. That was the line I built the poem around, I like opposing words together.
I'm so happy you liked the poem. Thx for stopping bye, always nice hearing from you 🤗
I'm so happy you liked the poem. Thx for stopping bye, always nice hearing from you 🤗
Re: Re. Redeemed
2nd Jun 2024 2:57pm
Re. Redeemed
2nd Jun 2024 7:12pm
Great poem & artwork. I never realised redemption could feel this good! 😉
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Re. Redeemed
4th Jun 2024 00:17am
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4th Jun 2024 9:40am
Re. Redeemed
7th Jun 2024 1:54am
This is very poetic! (Not all prose in here is)
It reads lush, and very creative.
What a feast for my brain this evening.
Well done, D-Bear.
It reads lush, and very creative.
What a feast for my brain this evening.
Well done, D-Bear.
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Re: Re. Redeemed
7th Jun 2024 9:14am
Aww. Thank you so very much.
So happy you liked it!
And thanks for RL, I hold your opinion highly.
So happy you liked it!
And thanks for RL, I hold your opinion highly.
Re: Re. Redeemed
9th Jun 2024 3:07am
You always have the coolest avatars! I noticed!
But your writing is what holds the reader's attention. Solid stuff every time .
But your writing is what holds the reader's attention. Solid stuff every time .
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Re: Re. Redeemed
9th Jun 2024 3:42am
Thanks so much. I actually have a pic of me I took
wearing a fancy masquerade like mask, but the pic is too big to fit
as my profile pic. I used it on chess com, it looks cool. The masked player, lol.
Right now I like fallen angel type pics
I appreciate what you said about my writing. Means a lot to me.
wearing a fancy masquerade like mask, but the pic is too big to fit
as my profile pic. I used it on chess com, it looks cool. The masked player, lol.
Right now I like fallen angel type pics
I appreciate what you said about my writing. Means a lot to me.
Re. Redeemed
5th Jul 2024 6:06am
Brilliant. I like the take on Alex Grey's artwork, ha-ha. You feel comfortable coming out of your feminine glow to be exuberant and shining, with your desires as a woman. The way you express that is uniquely original. It's almost as if you're of thorough conviction of it as a basic knowledge. Anyway, very expressive, very creative, very original. Take care!
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Re: Re. Redeemed
5th Jul 2024 9:35pm
That is a great compliment, to be unique and original.
I do have complete conviction in the desires I write of.b
Thank you!
I do have complete conviction in the desires I write of.b
Thank you!