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Life appears
A mirage we grasp at
Scarcely recounting mere moments
gone in the beating seconds
Like a night rainbow
Glimpsed in the washed away tears
of the forgotten rain
In the illusion that is
one comes to the realisation
There is only now
A conundrum
of cherished memories
bitter lamentations
Experiences to hold
Published 31st May 2024
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31st May 2024 7:14pm
That's simply beautiful, my poet and eloquently composed, maybe due in part, I love the sound of rain and rainbows.
Enjoy the remainder of your day and have an awesome weekend in all that you do, smile, and have faith.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
Enjoy the remainder of your day and have an awesome weekend in all that you do, smile, and have faith.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
31st May 2024 10:49pm
1st Jun 2024 6:42pm
You have such unappreciated genius in your images.
Carpe, the fucking concept of a night rainbow... I don't know if I've seen that before. It's BRILLIANT. I'm pissed I didn't think of it. It's... the entire poem is good, but that piece of linguistic gold is my current obsession.
Like a night rainbow
Glimpsed in the washed away tears
of the forgotten rain
O.M.G. That's amazing.
Carpe, the fucking concept of a night rainbow... I don't know if I've seen that before. It's BRILLIANT. I'm pissed I didn't think of it. It's... the entire poem is good, but that piece of linguistic gold is my current obsession.
Like a night rainbow
Glimpsed in the washed away tears
of the forgotten rain
O.M.G. That's amazing.
