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Fire Down Below
and we’re crashed here
legs tangled in half-light
I don’t know since when
but I do know the slickness
of spent fingers as I kiss them
I do know
the weight of your arms
circling my sunlit waist
and I’m not sure
of the measure
of everything
I wished tangible
as I worship
your beautiful broken parts
rebuilding your dreams
wondering
if the burn of me
still lingers on your tongue
if you’ll hold me long enough
to ever truly forget
Published 31st May 2024
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31st May 2024 11:05am
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31st May 2024 5:40pm
… shame I’m taken, huh. 🤣
I jest.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your thoughts on this one.
-M
PS: Your name is Yolanda
I jest.
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your thoughts on this one.
-M
PS: Your name is Yolanda
31st May 2024 5:52pm
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31st May 2024 5:54pm
Brava, Missy❣️ I find this piece refreshingly, authentically romantic.
31st May 2024 6:31pm
Hey Batman
How are you getting on?
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your thoughts on this. Glad to know I can still pull my feelings out of the bag occasionally.
Cheers and stuff :)
-M
How are you getting on?
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your thoughts on this. Glad to know I can still pull my feelings out of the bag occasionally.
Cheers and stuff :)
-M
5th Jun 2024 11:20pm
7th Jun 2024 3:27am
You get a "wow" for this.
I am actually smiling as I read this. It is so perfectly shared, for us to revel in your words.
What a great write.
I am actually smiling as I read this. It is so perfectly shared, for us to revel in your words.
What a great write.
