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Emerald Eyes
Please don’t blame me for the sighs
Seriously, have you seen those eyes?
Green great gorgeous guys
Piercing priceless my oh mys
My secret I’ll try to disguise
The culprit of my hellish demise
I’ve seen wonders in the night skies
But none as wondrous as this prize
So don’t condemn a heart or criticize
If you haven’t seen them emerald eyes
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Re. Emerald Eyes
29th May 2024 8:28pm
Love the play of words in the second stanza and I love the eyes. Tell's everything.
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29th May 2024 10:12pm
The eyes are so potent, aren't they? They speak quite eloquently all on their own. Clearly a pair of emerald eyes have been speaking to you. This moved so smoothly & said a lot 😊
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30th May 2024 3:13am
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30th May 2024 3:48am
Hazel eyes are a combination of green brown and gold. According to Ancient Greeks it was believed that people with hazel eyes were more intelligent and creative than those with other eye colors. In Celtic mythology, hazel eyes were associated with wisdom and the ability to see into the future. … a Queen indeed
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30th May 2024 4:06pm
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30th May 2024 00:28am
I could always get colored contacts… blue maybe? Or hazel?
Maybe I’ll get the kind that Marilyn Manson wears, hmm? That outta help…
Maybe I’ll get the kind that Marilyn Manson wears, hmm? That outta help…
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