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You quoted Monty Python
I told you I needed
to sit on your face
And you quoted
Monty Fucking Python.
The corners
of my eyes
crinkled
as I stepped out
of my
dark green
negligee
and watched your
Adam’s apple
stick for
a moment too long
when
you swallowed
“Sit on my face
and tell me you
love me,”
you said
I pushed
your shoulders
into the bed
with my
knees
and there’s no
doubt in either
of our heads
that
I will
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26th May 2024 6:56am
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Re: Re. You quoted Monty Python
27th May 2024 6:28am
It's just beautiful, and romantic and funny. You combine everything great about intimacy whilst also making it solely female focused which is rare, and yet still dominant as the other party has requested what to say. It's all very clever and well crafted. I've rambled but I do really love it so...
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Re. You quoted Monty Python
29th May 2024 1:43am
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Re. You quoted Monty Python
29th May 2024 1:57am
Hah! You had me with the title. Literally can't read this without the tune running through the mind! Go get you some!
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