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Stranded
Have you ever been in the desert
Surrounded by water?
Wanting something to drink
but it would never quench.
Hypnotized by thought's
"if I can just..."
You try to dive in,
just to be guided back.
Surrounded by water?
Wanting something to drink
but it would never quench.
Hypnotized by thought's
"if I can just..."
You try to dive in,
just to be guided back.
Published 21st May 2024
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21st May 2024 6:05pm
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21st May 2024 7:33pm
21st May 2024 6:41pm
"Rabid" random thoughts surrounded by an ocean of water but can't drink. But hydrophobia wasn't a fear of water, it was throat spasms causing the problem. Cure the spasms and drink from that poetic ocean.
21st May 2024 7:34pm
22nd May 2024 3:09am
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23rd May 2024 6:25pm
Very real. I know that feeling. Great minimalistic piece of poetry.
23rd May 2024 6:53pm
23rd May 2024 8:20pm
It's a good random thought akin to feeling alone in the midst of a crowd, longing to belong.
23rd May 2024 8:22pm
