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Fallen
In keeping with celestial charms
you took my hand, then arm in arm
we feathered fathoms high above
into the clouds where we made love.
The angels blushed and gathered round
as nude and wet, you laid me down
on floating cotton fluffs of mist
that rumbled softly while we kissed.
Our passion brewed electric charge.
You spread my legs. Though not so large,
my breasts, suspended, swayed in time
to claps of thunder from behind.
Fists of hair, your thrusting surged
until my velvet need was purged
with lightning bolts that pierced my core
where sheets of rain began to pour
a deluge down on mother earth.
I screamed like I was giving birth!
And in those throws of pleasure’s pain
arose a mighty hurricane
that flung us deeply into space.
We came to rest and took our place
amongst the constellations’ lights
where we could sparkle, bold and bright.
But you had warned, a mortal’s shine
is shortly lived and lost in time;
that every star up in the sky
will one day fade and surely die.
And so, from gleam of Heaven’s face
I lost your hand and fell from grace
through cold blue dark and breathless air
at comet speed – extinguished flare.
you took my hand, then arm in arm
we feathered fathoms high above
into the clouds where we made love.
The angels blushed and gathered round
as nude and wet, you laid me down
on floating cotton fluffs of mist
that rumbled softly while we kissed.
Our passion brewed electric charge.
You spread my legs. Though not so large,
my breasts, suspended, swayed in time
to claps of thunder from behind.
Fists of hair, your thrusting surged
until my velvet need was purged
with lightning bolts that pierced my core
where sheets of rain began to pour
a deluge down on mother earth.
I screamed like I was giving birth!
And in those throws of pleasure’s pain
arose a mighty hurricane
that flung us deeply into space.
We came to rest and took our place
amongst the constellations’ lights
where we could sparkle, bold and bright.
But you had warned, a mortal’s shine
is shortly lived and lost in time;
that every star up in the sky
will one day fade and surely die.
And so, from gleam of Heaven’s face
I lost your hand and fell from grace
through cold blue dark and breathless air
at comet speed – extinguished flare.
Published 19th May 2024
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19th May 2024 6:31am
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19th May 2024 7:36pm
I will never ever let you fall… you know that… I’ll always be there to catch you…. Amazing poetry from a celestial star
19th May 2024 8:55pm
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20th May 2024 2:45am
The metaphor is great on this and the ending sad. But beautifully done.
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26th May 2024 7:12am
Ah, the fallen angels 💕 Love the many references to the universe - constellations, space, stars, celestial and heaven and the rhyme in this one is Perfect! Great write, lovely lady.
26th May 2024 6:53pm
4th Jun 2024 1:31am
Love the mix of literal, metaphorical, carnal, and sensual. That's some sho nuff "feel it in my bones" WordSmithing.
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4th Jun 2024 3:57am
That is so awesome! Thank you, fatboy! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.
Meg
Meg
