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THE POEM UNWRITTEN
the poem
unwritten
again
and again,
the empty page,
a smattering
of disconnected
thoughts,
poetic fakery,
stupid word play
unnamed
distractions
porn
that girl's big ass
big tits
thick thighs
the way she shakes it
takes it
and too much wine
again
and the way she left
and took the kids,
the car
and the goddamn bills piling
overdue
relentless
mundane
work-a-day
bullshit
grinding
the heart to
wordless
mush,
squeezing the
joy out,
the life out,
crowding
the mind
and leaving the poem
unwritten
unwritten
again
and again,
the empty page,
a smattering
of disconnected
thoughts,
poetic fakery,
stupid word play
unnamed
distractions
porn
that girl's big ass
big tits
thick thighs
the way she shakes it
takes it
and too much wine
again
and the way she left
and took the kids,
the car
and the goddamn bills piling
overdue
relentless
mundane
work-a-day
bullshit
grinding
the heart to
wordless
mush,
squeezing the
joy out,
the life out,
crowding
the mind
and leaving the poem
unwritten
Published 18th May 2024
Author's Note
A poem inspired by that comp, The Poem Unwritten.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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18th May 2024 3:26pm
One of the things I love about hosting comes is seeing how vastly different the paths travel for each writer. No 2 ever the same or generic. Fabulous entry! Good luck in the comp!
18th May 2024 3:49pm
18th May 2024 7:27pm
UGH, YES! your flow, your vibe, the way you just shit imagery on the page and dare the reader to look closer is beautiful. I mean that.
The crass and delectable big tits, and the turmoil of a world collapse when she leaves, and just... yes. This hit right.
The crass and delectable big tits, and the turmoil of a world collapse when she leaves, and just... yes. This hit right.
19th May 2024 00:43am
