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Surrender
Frayed and tattered,
Broken and battered....
Nothing remains of the love i once knew .
Enraged and Inflamed,
Yet sadly I'm blamed...
And the sad part is we're not brand new.
Judging and thinking,...
Swimming and sinking...
This fire in me burns just for you .
But this flame and heat ,
Have now got me beat,
And there's just nothing left I can do.
Broken and battered....
Nothing remains of the love i once knew .
Enraged and Inflamed,
Yet sadly I'm blamed...
And the sad part is we're not brand new.
Judging and thinking,...
Swimming and sinking...
This fire in me burns just for you .
But this flame and heat ,
Have now got me beat,
And there's just nothing left I can do.
Published 18th May 2024
Author's Note
I hate the choices they give you for themes on here but mine would be defeated , tired of being used. I give up. Fuck it! Lol
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21st May 2024 1:14am
29th Jul 2024 4:45pm
I agree. The themes they give Suck!!!! But I get what your poem is about. To the point, great rhymes and well received.
