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Tronic
Bing
Bang
Cick
Ring
Silver flashes everywhere
The typing of keys
Infultrate my dreams
A mouse that does not live
Squeakes across
A whirring noise is heard
Mindless students stare blankly
Their brains turning to mush
Bang
Cick
Ring
Silver flashes everywhere
The typing of keys
Infultrate my dreams
A mouse that does not live
Squeakes across
A whirring noise is heard
Mindless students stare blankly
Their brains turning to mush
Published 21st Feb 2010
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22nd Feb 2010 4:24am
This left my mind whirling with flashing colors. I am under the belidf that this is some sort of machine, but...I could be very mistaken. I am intrigued to find out what the actual inspiration was.
23rd Feb 2010 6:25am
I'm taking this as a critique of overusing computers. I like the metaphors. A few spelling mistakes, though.
