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black
an unwritten poem
which was to be written in the coolness of the moon
which was about to scream with a devoted love and infinite pain.
in which a black rainbow was going to be visible on the bookmarked background
in which someone was going to sit on a bench in autumn and smile brightly
in which the royal silence rising from the east was to be whispers in one's ears
in which one had to kiss someone's lips
in which someone wanted to eat someone's tender flesh
someone was going to understand the art of someone's unexplained love
someone was roaming around with dry leaves in her black soft hair
someone was trapped between the faint light and the broken face piece
tears filled with half-truths and empty words were about to kiss the cheeks
time was about to grow and the rose in the envelope was about to fade
there were no stars shining on the dark background
the soul steamer was going to imprison someone for eternity
an unwritten poem full of mysteries was to be evoked in narrowed eyes...
which was to be written in the coolness of the moon
which was about to scream with a devoted love and infinite pain.
in which a black rainbow was going to be visible on the bookmarked background
in which someone was going to sit on a bench in autumn and smile brightly
in which the royal silence rising from the east was to be whispers in one's ears
in which one had to kiss someone's lips
in which someone wanted to eat someone's tender flesh
someone was going to understand the art of someone's unexplained love
someone was roaming around with dry leaves in her black soft hair
someone was trapped between the faint light and the broken face piece
tears filled with half-truths and empty words were about to kiss the cheeks
time was about to grow and the rose in the envelope was about to fade
there were no stars shining on the dark background
the soul steamer was going to imprison someone for eternity
an unwritten poem full of mysteries was to be evoked in narrowed eyes...
Published 14th May 2024
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14th May 2024 1:24pm
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17th May 2024 3:54am
I like the repetition you use as a poetic element and the symmetry you establish with "unwritten poem" at the beginning and end of your piece.
17th May 2024 6:01am
this is my favorite poetry which has been liked by very few people... n its a part of a competition.. but you visited my profile and gave your feedback, thank you for that from the bottom of my heart...
19th May 2024 1:27am
Dimpy...you are an angel-poet.
I know you are. You must be. There is no other explanation.
I know you are. You must be. There is no other explanation.
19th May 2024 4:50am
my god.... thanks very much J for your precious words...I'm glad that you believe in me... ❤
