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If we meet again
If we meet again
Be a little more patient.
If we meet again
Be a little less arrogant.
Let’s meet again.
Where the sky is dark blue
If we take deep breaths
Our lungs would be dyed in that blue.
Let’s meet again.
Where a soft breeze brushes our cheeks
When I look at you
Give me that green smile.
If we meet again
Stay with me this time.
If we meet again
Don’t leave me alone in this life
Be a little more patient.
If we meet again
Be a little less arrogant.
Let’s meet again.
Where the sky is dark blue
If we take deep breaths
Our lungs would be dyed in that blue.
Let’s meet again.
Where a soft breeze brushes our cheeks
When I look at you
Give me that green smile.
If we meet again
Stay with me this time.
If we meet again
Don’t leave me alone in this life
Published 12th May 2024
Author's Note
We often stay with people but can't stay for whole life. But what if life gives you a second chance?
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12th May 2024 5:31pm
12th May 2024 6:03pm
13th May 2024 12:58pm
👏 👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 ink spill 👏 my friend 👏!! This poem reminds me of one mines called don't hurt me again!! You should check it out when 🤔 you get. Chance ok!!
Great 👍 work please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Great 👍 work please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
13th May 2024 2:05pm
14th May 2024 2:46pm
"Our lungs would be dyed in that blue"- Excellent integration of vivid imagery; keep writing.
Always,
-Alois
Always,
-Alois
14th May 2024 4:11pm
16th May 2024 5:08pm
Hoi hoi
A very good ink maker from England makes the (fountain pen) ink called: writers blood.
A sort of deep brown/red. Just like you expect it would look.
The Makers (diamine - since god knows when) have an array of different colours.
Apart from this technicality, I very much enjoyed your tight and romantic write.
I love it.
Hope for more of this.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
A very good ink maker from England makes the (fountain pen) ink called: writers blood.
A sort of deep brown/red. Just like you expect it would look.
The Makers (diamine - since god knows when) have an array of different colours.
Apart from this technicality, I very much enjoyed your tight and romantic write.
I love it.
Hope for more of this.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus
16th May 2024 7:46pm
