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Depression
I took no one
To prom
I didn’t even
Cruise the drag
With the dregs
That night
I shuttered my window
I turned off the light
I think
I spent the night
Begging
For no dawn
To prom
I didn’t even
Cruise the drag
With the dregs
That night
I shuttered my window
I turned off the light
I think
I spent the night
Begging
For no dawn
Published 12th May 2024
Author's Note
I’ve tried so hard to stay sober, but I can’t
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12th May 2024 6:47am
Dear TMW,
This poem has arms, legs and teeth that grab the reader with so much with which to relate. It harkens for me, very similar feelings and experiences not only for prom but the list could go on. And on. And on. Your gift of writing and sharing has such a great ability to help me and others feel so not alone in this chaotic world. H🌷
This poem has arms, legs and teeth that grab the reader with so much with which to relate. It harkens for me, very similar feelings and experiences not only for prom but the list could go on. And on. And on. Your gift of writing and sharing has such a great ability to help me and others feel so not alone in this chaotic world. H🌷
12th May 2024 10:14am
12th May 2024 9:43am
3rd Jun 2024 2:39am
I know the feeling. I've been there, and own the t-shirt. It's not an easy road. Stay tough, hopefully things will get better. Great writing.
DL
DL
3rd Jun 2024 5:13am
