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Tears
Salty reminders
break away
and roll
down my cheek
as the song
playing
in the background
hits its peak.
break away
and roll
down my cheek
as the song
playing
in the background
hits its peak.
Published 10th May 2024
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10th May 2024 9:17pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:51am
10th May 2024 11:11pm
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11th May 2024 3:23am
It's a funky feeling and I know I'm not the only hurting and there is comfort in that.
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:51am
11th May 2024 3:24am
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11th May 2024 2:07am
Oh fuck, the song. After the end, hearing The Song rips the soul open again, and again, and again.
Great reflection on grief, and the way it's triggered.
Great reflection on grief, and the way it's triggered.
11th May 2024 3:25am
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11th May 2024 3:27am
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11th May 2024 3:52am
There isn't just 1 song, it's a few that I have on repeat because I just want to cry out this pain.
11th May 2024 3:55am
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
12th May 2024 3:22am
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12th May 2024 3:27am
I'm just trying to cry the pain out, exercise to sweat it out, and write poetry to get it out.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
12th May 2024 3:30am
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Cry by Faith Hill at the moment. Followed by Drivers License by Olivia Rodrigo.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
12th May 2024 3:49am
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12th May 2024 3:35am
12th May 2024 3:45am
That moment when the tears have welled up so much you don't even need to blink. Thank you.
Anonymous
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12th May 2024 4:03am
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12th May 2024 10:25pm
I listened to all 3 and I liked the 2nd one the most so I will be adding that one to my list, thank you for sharing.
12th May 2024 4:47am
I hope listening to music is helping. You know, it's a cliche but time heals.
LJ
LJ
12th May 2024 10:26pm
12th May 2024 12:07pm
I know this feeling all too well! I get this gem of a poem. Crying can be a good thing. Well done!
12th May 2024 10:31pm
12th May 2024 10:35pm
