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Feck!                                  

"This competition is about what triggers your ego to act not yourself                                 and it could be on any subject  " by   dejure ( vick)  (hmm, I shall rewminate...)                          
                                                            
          
  Freeking competitions set off by some smart arse                    
I hate that poncy worded stuff it sets me off to killll!                  
" Challenge your ego " shite, what a freeking farce                  
my ENTIRE EXISTENCE CHALLENGES ME  ( voice, rises,somewhat shrill)                  
                  
And don't set me off about " to act not yourself " jeez...                  
can't you hear your fascist schoolteacherish magistral self                  
who rant " should've thought before you did the crime " oh, puleese,                  
cos libs say " they did it increase their lack of worldly wealth..."                  
                  
And that reminds me don't expect any intelligent responses                  
any other freek will write about the extreme lack of cash,                  
or some trashy arty-farty wishy-washy facile ponce's              
spuriously embroidered smugly written spunkless effing trash!              
                  
There, that's what sets me orf, gets my goat, jerks my naked string                  
That and the toadying popular vote tills going kerching! Kerching!  
 
Written by Rew
Published | Edited 12th May 2024
Author's Note
an hysterical sonnet also
a competition entry.
For some reason I took it down
but reposted here.


good fun writing it. Really good fun, try it sometime...

For some strange reason its got the heading/theme of ANGER and I can't shift that word. Perplexing
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