Secrets

This is different and I really like this!

What do you wanna know? You need but ask.

So many things, Mr. Dark.  I'm sure we can cover them during your office hours.

Beautiful. But our secret will stay where it belongs in "The Room" But seriously this is nice work. Fia xoxo

But seriously, the door to my room is open

secrets can be wonderful

And telling them is even better

You already know everything…

I know better

I enjoy your usage of words and how they lay on the page, and I especially like that you are touching on different subjects.
Write ✍️ on Kitten ☺️♥️
Jackie xo

Jackie, thanks for reading.  I’m glad you like this!  Means a lot from someone so accomplished

Meg
xoxo

Well that was really nice of you to say, I’m not sure if I consider myself accomplished, but I’ll take it 🤗♥️
Thank you Kitten
Jackie xoxox

You certainly have some experiences I envy

No worries you’ll get there Kitten :)
Please believe, I’ve been here 12 years but when I first came here not to put myself down, but, my stuff was like written by a kid. It was horrible. I learned a lot being on this site . There are some really good teachers here. I’ll tell you that right now. If I can offer one piece of advice, count your syllables when rhyming. That’s what was told to me, and it’s true It makes all the difference.
Jackie ☺️

Not to intrude, but besides syllable count, alliteration helps too with flow and, at times, brings out important parts.

There, I'm done.

I appreciate the advice.  Of course, these days, poets are not frequently into rhyme.  I like it, though.

Thanks!

I can relate. I prefer prose :)

Your stanzas are akin to Sapphic ones.

Excruciatingly elegant:)

Oh wow, thank you for that!