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Lessons
Sometimes, my body burns to know yours. To learn everything that you are. Sometimes, I can't stop burning to know you. Are you out there somewhere? I yearn to be taught both your harsh and gentle lessons.
Published 4th May 2024
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4th May 2024 1:26pm
4th May 2024 3:23pm
Oh my gosh thank you for that. You made my day. I hope you're having a fantastic weekend!
4th May 2024 2:23pm
4th May 2024 3:24pm
As always, thank you Sam for your wonderful comments. I appreciate you so much. I hope you're doing great!
5th May 2024 00:37am
Your willingness to learn the other person said a lot. Love the poem. Pretty picture by the way. Fia xoxox
8th May 2024 1:58am
8th May 2024 2:01am
Thank you for asking I am doing well. Taking your advise and sitting on some poems to see if I can make it better.
Fia xoxo
Fia xoxo
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8th May 2024 1:59am
Thank you so much for that Dragon. I hope your week has gone great so far...
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7th May 2024 2:26pm
Beautiful in all it's truth. Great poem and has so many valid points.
8th May 2024 2:01am
Thank you so much for that. I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I hope your week is going great!
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