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The beauty of her grandeur
Reflecting on long gone days of youth,
What sticks out most,
Were not long words, nor noble call toward actions,
But, of quiet beauty & repose,
She removed her helm,
And let down her hair,
She removed her armor for me,
Silently there, completely defenseless,
Knowing I knew
That it took more strength for her,
To remove her armor,
Than to put it on,
She… learned, to trust in me,
Oh how I loved how she carried herself
And I was struck in awe
Of the beauty of her grandeur
What sticks out most,
Were not long words, nor noble call toward actions,
But, of quiet beauty & repose,
She removed her helm,
And let down her hair,
She removed her armor for me,
Silently there, completely defenseless,
Knowing I knew
That it took more strength for her,
To remove her armor,
Than to put it on,
She… learned, to trust in me,
Oh how I loved how she carried herself
And I was struck in awe
Of the beauty of her grandeur
Published 3rd May 2024
Author's Note
For ARTISTRY OF SILENCE competition
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3rd May 2024 1:42pm
An exquisite piece of writing Ed. How have you been? Good luck in the comp.
3rd May 2024 1:48pm
Thank you,.. been sick again, was kinda bed ridden, not really able to get around for a few... Hows it goin on your end my friend...
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- Edited 14th Jun 2024 7:45am
3rd May 2024 2:43pm
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8th Sep 2024 1:35am
Sounds like you found some needed peace in this scribe; light in the dark depths. Nice scribe I like that energy.
