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Reborn
The womb of morning contracted,
birthing fragile but familiar light.
Fluorescent thoughts of possibility
conquer abysmal frights of night.
The birds converse
about dawn's multiple destinies.
Choices versus inevitabilities.
Behold the starlings cry,
full of harsh trills but gentle rattle.
A rapid alternation of chords
I lay down my mental swords,
as the sun is poured.
Onto another daily battle.
birthing fragile but familiar light.
Fluorescent thoughts of possibility
conquer abysmal frights of night.
The birds converse
about dawn's multiple destinies.
Choices versus inevitabilities.
Behold the starlings cry,
full of harsh trills but gentle rattle.
A rapid alternation of chords
I lay down my mental swords,
as the sun is poured.
Onto another daily battle.
Author's Note
Morning thoughts......
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Re. Reborn
3rd May 2024 11:42am
Wonderfully written. This has a nice vibe for a sunny Friday morning. Love the flow and the few words you chose to rhyme.
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3rd May 2024 11:53am
Aww. I'm glad it gave you that vibe. That's the kind of vibe it gave me. 😊
Thanks for checking out and nice comments.
Thanks for checking out and nice comments.
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3rd May 2024 12:13pm
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Re. Reborn
3rd May 2024 1:08pm
I’ve always thought everything looks better in the morning, especially after a good cry.
Love this, girl
Love this, girl
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3rd May 2024 2:27pm
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Anonymous
3rd May 2024 7:14pm
Those last 3 lines hold an immense amount of power. Such a strong piece
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Re. Reborn
3rd May 2024 7:23pm
Thank you. I like the positive message here. A new day brings hope. Thx as always for checking out.
Re. Reborn
4th May 2024 8:44am
Gee,
What's in your coffee?
Can you brew me one so I can write such a poem like yours?
I love it!
The calm before the storm, right?
This is such a nice calm..
♡
What's in your coffee?
Can you brew me one so I can write such a poem like yours?
I love it!
The calm before the storm, right?
This is such a nice calm..
♡
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Re: Re. Reborn
4th May 2024 9:49am
Thank you for the smile, I needed one!
If I can put hope into words, I like to share the sentiment.
Appreciate all your support!
Have a great day 😊
Oh I brew Starbucks coffee at home, lol
Creative juice!
If I can put hope into words, I like to share the sentiment.
Appreciate all your support!
Have a great day 😊
Oh I brew Starbucks coffee at home, lol
Creative juice!
Re. Reborn
5th Jul 2024 5:13am
This is brilliant. Your precise definitions and contrasts of language use a very balanced and concrete disposition of certainty, ultimately gauging the metaphors that explain the observations and emotions. Bravo!
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5th Jul 2024 8:11pm