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Arc de triumph
Poem entry for Fia's Karma Sutra competition
My back
I arced
When he
triumphed
Inside
He came
In the dark
The night
I cried
When I
Lost my pride
I let
Him slide
His pride
Inside
Pretended
To fight
He knew
I lied
He saw
The spark
My eyes
Replied
I tried
To hide
My heart
Denied
As
He
triumphed
Inside
I arched
My back
My back
I arced
When he
triumphed
Inside
He came
In the dark
The night
I cried
When I
Lost my pride
I let
Him slide
His pride
Inside
Pretended
To fight
He knew
I lied
He saw
The spark
My eyes
Replied
I tried
To hide
My heart
Denied
As
He
triumphed
Inside
I arched
My back
Written by
Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 30th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Poem entry for Fia's Karma Sutra competition
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30th Apr 2024 8:20pm
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30th Apr 2024 8:33pm
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30th Apr 2024 8:34pm
Re. Arc de triumph
1st May 2024 7:54am
That's one helluva competition entry. Love the rhyme in this one. Very clever use of pride too.
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1st May 2024 3:52pm
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2nd May 2024 7:36am
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1st May 2024 5:00pm
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1st May 2024 8:48pm
Re. Arc de triumph
1st May 2024 8:01pm
Wow, the arch of (his) triumph! I did think when I saw the title it might be about a sex position rather than the Paris landmark.
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1st May 2024 8:51pm
I never knew there was a sex position called “Arc de triumph” before Fia hosted this Karma Sutra competition. This is to show that each time we fuck around we learn something new. Thank you for your nice comment S
Re. Arc de triumph
1st May 2024 8:58pm
"...each time we fuck around we learn something new" - Love that! New meaning on sex education!
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1st May 2024 9:51pm
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1st May 2024 10:09pm
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1st May 2024 11:03pm
For some reason I think I want to play with you.. twister M… just twister… geez… give a girl an inch and she wants to take the whole 8… just twisting your twisters M.. I love it when your greens turn red… my favorite two colors … and you
Re. Arc de triumph
5th May 2024 00:28am
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!extremely excellent 👏 ink spill 👏 and great agility as well as flexibility with that arc!! I'm impressed 👏
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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5th May 2024 00:37am
Yes this one does require some agility…me I couldn’t make it myself… maybe you could
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5th May 2024 1:19am
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