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Please Say Yes Tonight
This is the new version of "Don't Say No Tonight."
Darling, I’ve fallen in love with you
You have full control of my heart
I told you my greatest desire
Oh baby, I belong to you exclusively
My heart will love you endlessly
If words were powerful enough,
You’d be my ladylove today
Come to me before I fall apart
Darling, please say yes tonight
All I’m asking for is your love
I’ve revealed my feelings for you,
So I’ll wait patiently while you decide
Darling, I’ve fallen in love with you
You have full control of my heart
I told you my greatest desire
Oh baby, I belong to you exclusively
My heart will love you endlessly
If words were powerful enough,
You’d be my ladylove today
Come to me before I fall apart
Darling, please say yes tonight
All I’m asking for is your love
I’ve revealed my feelings for you,
So I’ll wait patiently while you decide
Published 30th Apr 2024
| Edited 29th Sep 2024
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
30th Apr 2024 6:51pm
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1st May 2024 00:13am
I learned that too the hard way, but I also learned that not all women are the same. Thank you for the comment.
1st May 2024 6:08am
These were the enthralling musings that captivated my intellect years ago. Your poetic serenades were always mesmerizing to whomever your heart serenaded.
Beautifully composed if I must admit, my Jamaican King.
Grand Rising and enjoy your Wednesday.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
Beautifully composed if I must admit, my Jamaican King.
Grand Rising and enjoy your Wednesday.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
1st May 2024 2:39pm
