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Gloom
A single dragonfly
could spark joyful words
in this glacial gloom,
instead,
flies darken the sun,
the glowing hive
I once called home.
could spark joyful words
in this glacial gloom,
instead,
flies darken the sun,
the glowing hive
I once called home.
Published 30th Apr 2024
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1st May 2024 5:36am
Dear M,
Using an economy of words you paint a very vivid picture in this piece. It made me think how fragile family dynamics are and their ever lasting effects. Terrific writing. H🌷
Using an economy of words you paint a very vivid picture in this piece. It made me think how fragile family dynamics are and their ever lasting effects. Terrific writing. H🌷
3rd May 2024 11:40am
Thank you so much, Honoria. Your take on my poem is very interesting, one I had not anticipated, but that's the beauty of poetry, in my opinion. Once again, I really appreciate your comment!
Mundus
Mundus
