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Twirl-a-Girl
Poem entry for Fia's Karma Sutra competition
Twirl girl do a twirl
Don’t want a missionary
Want my back to arc
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
Twirl girl do a twirl
Don’t want a missionary
Want my back to arc
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
Written by
Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 30th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Poem entry for Fia's Karma Sutra competition
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Re. Twirl-a-Girl
Anonymous
30th Apr 2024 10:24am
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30th Apr 2024 3:59pm
oh crap.... don't test that... you'll hurt your back... actually you'll hurt his... I shouldn't be suggesting things which arcs
Re. Twirl-a-Girl
30th Apr 2024 11:18am
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Re. Twirl-a-Girl
2nd May 2024 3:10am
Nah….
That looks I’m knitting while I watching tv, or watching a snail run past me.
That looks I’m knitting while I watching tv, or watching a snail run past me.
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Re: Re. Twirl-a-Girl
2nd May 2024 3:26am
You’re a hard lady to please. What’s wrong with knitting and letting a snail bite your ass… I’ve used the word “bite” because I’m too shy to use that other word.. come on… this is not my fault .. go and take it up with Fia. Out of a hundred cards in the karma Sutra deck she chose the twirl.. let’s see you do better…oh yes im challenging you to post something in Fia Karma Sutra competition… let’s see how hard that snail can “fite” your ass .. and yes “fite” is a word … I just made it up
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Nov 2024 6:45pm
4th May 2024 9:57pm
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Re: Re. Twirl-a-Girl
4th May 2024 10:01pm
Ok I said my life is in your hands .. but you don’t have to twist …you really want me dead don’t you !!
Anonymous
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4th May 2024 10:13pm
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Re: Re. Twirl-a-Girl
4th May 2024 10:16pm
Something tells me I shouldn’t believe you… but I will give you the benefit of the doubt
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4th May 2024 10:29pm
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Re. Twirl-a-Girl
5th May 2024 00:21am
👏 👏 👏 👏!!nice 👌 work 👌 never twirl a girl before! How about a dip with a reverse twist with a slight lift!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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