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Ego
I felt the passion when you were explaining how you felt
You got angry and started berating me after
I tried to give a shit.
I tried really hard
I was diagnosed with indifference
Im kind of self conscious about it
You could be a little more sympathetic and understanding
You got angry and started berating me after
I tried to give a shit.
I tried really hard
I was diagnosed with indifference
Im kind of self conscious about it
You could be a little more sympathetic and understanding
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Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 3:51am
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28th Apr 2024 3:53am
Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 8:18am
I was diagnosed with indifference
very powerful line my friend....love it. <3
very powerful line my friend....love it. <3
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Re: Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 3:04pm
Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 10:03am
Strong message. Care about yourself. That's all that matters. Great job Rob.
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Re: Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 3:05pm
Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 4:00pm
I was diagnosed with indifference
we suffer from self-centered syndrome, we care less about others,
What a time is this ? we dont know.
Thanks for sharing !
we suffer from self-centered syndrome, we care less about others,
What a time is this ? we dont know.
Thanks for sharing !
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Re: Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 4:07pm
Appreciate you reading and commenting.
I want always this way. Just too much investing in others to my own detriment.
I want always this way. Just too much investing in others to my own detriment.
Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 9:33pm
"Diagnosed with indifference"
That's the line of the century... definitely caught everyone's attention. Did they give you any medication or is it terminal? Your poem is perfectly balanced. You don't try to say too much.
That's the line of the century... definitely caught everyone's attention. Did they give you any medication or is it terminal? Your poem is perfectly balanced. You don't try to say too much.
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Re: Re. Ego
28th Apr 2024 10:03pm
I'm afraid its a terminal case of dont give a fuck. Thank you for reading and commenting.