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Deprived Dreams
I'm breaking down
In mid of day
The connections
That keep the peace
'Tween truth and lies
Ripping back drapes
Monsters flashing
Before my eyes
Cogs tearing down
Machinery
Overheating
Cognition slips
Brain in first gear
Red lights seem green
Heading full speed
Something Inside
Scream. Screams! SCREAMING!!
Brakes glowing red
Heart shakes and aches
Adrenaline
Quick infusion
Caffeine can't match
Carries safely
My return home
In mid of day
The connections
That keep the peace
'Tween truth and lies
Ripping back drapes
Monsters flashing
Before my eyes
Cogs tearing down
Machinery
Overheating
Cognition slips
Brain in first gear
Red lights seem green
Heading full speed
Something Inside
Scream. Screams! SCREAMING!!
Brakes glowing red
Heart shakes and aches
Adrenaline
Quick infusion
Caffeine can't match
Carries safely
My return home
Published 27th Apr 2024
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27th Apr 2024 00:56am
hello Josiah what I got from this is a message that I'm not rejecting simply telling you I'm there already in my soul I never left if my poetry makes me less than appealing to you I will not be offended but perhaps hurt...I will not just go away empty I did not give of my soul to be banished to the void because some are convinced of their superiority and have stolen my rights to my family to the point they can't understand me. emotive write I am all natural magic woman.I made no agreement to marry anyone in the immortal there is a bond but no vow.
29th Apr 2024 5:53pm
Hi Crimsin :) Thank you for the read. Your words paint a vivid picture of resilience and self-assurance. You're like a beacon of raw authenticity, refusing to be confined by others' perceptions. Your words are your soul's language. Keep shining your natural magic—your voice is a force to be reckoned with.
