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Blood Play
grab your knife
and let it slide
over my skin
make me fear
your darkness
push my limits
over the edge
and break me
i want to feel the
sensations of the
blade the blood
it creates the
scars it makes
engrave your
name indelibly
i need the pain
the thrill the fear
to feel that i'm alive
come & grab that knife
and let it slide
over my skin
make me fear
your darkness
push my limits
over the edge
and break me
i want to feel the
sensations of the
blade the blood
it creates the
scars it makes
engrave your
name indelibly
i need the pain
the thrill the fear
to feel that i'm alive
come & grab that knife
Published 26th Apr 2024
Author's Note
About pain and pleasure.
https://youtu.be/LCJblaUkkfc
https://youtu.be/LCJblaUkkfc
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26th Apr 2024 2:09pm
26th Apr 2024 2:30pm
26th Apr 2024 2:37pm
So many of us need the same thing ...
Giving and getting ..
Exquisite
BIG LIKE
Giving and getting ..
Exquisite
BIG LIKE
26th Apr 2024 2:43pm
Anonymous
26th Apr 2024 2:46pm
Hmm? This surely takes a different mentality than what I'm used to. I debated even commenting.
To each his own though. I guess I've seen too many 48 hours episodes and read too many crime books. lol
To each his own though. I guess I've seen too many 48 hours episodes and read too many crime books. lol
26th Apr 2024 5:08pm
Not everyone is comfortable with BDSM or aspects of it, I appreciate it that you choose to comment on my write anyway. So thanks heaps for that :-)
26th Apr 2024 3:53pm
I don’t think my wife could handle the blood, but I’ve definitely been turned on by pain before!
Love Radiohead btw.
Love Radiohead btw.
26th Apr 2024 5:14pm
Pain can most certainly be a turn on and blood is not for everyone. You made me smile by checking out the link, Radiohead is an amazing band. Thanks heaps for your comment.
26th Apr 2024 4:16pm
Girl, how long are you going to make my list?
As I’ve said before, I adore your authenticity.
As I’ve said before, I adore your authenticity.
26th Apr 2024 5:16pm
You made me smile big time, I have no idea.
And that's a beautiful comment, thanks heaps Her.
And that's a beautiful comment, thanks heaps Her.
26th Apr 2024 4:59pm
When the pain overshadows the pain in the mind...beauty! Sending love, sis ❤️
26th Apr 2024 5:16pm
26th Apr 2024 7:13pm
Sorry for being late to the party. Brought back so many memories. Holding the knife you have to be so carful. Fia xoxo
27th Apr 2024 5:36am
There's no such thing as being late, dear Fia. Happy to hear this one brought back memories and yes, one has to be very careful. Thanks heaps for your visit and comment 💕
13th May 2024 9:35pm
Not too many writers are brave enough to admit they think about this stuff. I love the piece and your openness. You will always get mixed reactions to your darkest fantasies. Consider mine a smile...
14th May 2024 5:44am
Yes, this is certainly not for everyone and I'm very aware of that. So happy to hear you love this piece, appreciate my openness and that it gave you a smile.
Thanks heaps for your comment, I appreciate you 🙏🏻
Thanks heaps for your comment, I appreciate you 🙏🏻
