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Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 11:57am
It's sad but true! Every step you take is one step closer to your demise. I want to enjoy every minute that I still have on this earth. Thought-provoking piece!
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Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 11:58am
It's a grim little haiku with some black humor in it. Glad you enjoyed. Thank you, as always!
Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 12:00pm
Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 12:12pm
That's the thing our physical bodies are decaying,
inevitable fact. The fact itself stinks.
I like how you worded this.
inevitable fact. The fact itself stinks.
I like how you worded this.
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Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 3:03pm
Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 1:22pm
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26th Apr 2024 3:04pm
Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 5:31pm
The sweet savory reminder of real life NOW....grab the day...dare to do the taboo...tomorrow may be too late. Hugs and love, Oral xoox
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Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 5:56pm
Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 7:23pm
Get a shower, and get some work put in! Ha-ha, just kidding. Good job of capturing part of what it means to be human - to one day die. No amount of complex rationality or comprehensible reasoning can overcome that fact. It's simply physically impossible. The realization of that can bring all sorts of emotions, and you capture some of that here. It really does kind of show the futility, and to me, the vanity and pride behind being a so-called intellectual. There is necessity for being smart, but there's a balance. Same thing goes with pleasure of sense - you need balance in that too. I suppose those both are being alluded to here, in showing there is care needed to be taken for both the mind and body, now that I think about it. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 7:41pm
As always, thanks for the feedback.
Two ways you can look at this..
one-is that were literally decaying
two- it just stinks that were getting old.
Two ways you can look at this..
one-is that were literally decaying
two- it just stinks that were getting old.
Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 8:30pm
Okay, yeah, ha-ha. Thanks for clearing that up. I get a bit lost in interpretations sometimes and forget the artist's attempt to convey in itself. Yeah, I can definitely see that. That's kind of like your theme for the day, heh. Thanks for sharing, and have a good one.
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Re: Re. As soon as your born your dying
26th Apr 2024 8:37pm