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Midnight Ramblins#11 ~ mirrored writing
I was somewhere,
Somewhere hard to find,
Finding how tomorrow changes,
Changing everything, if I could
Could only have the other half of you,
`~,,~`
Mí vida, por favor,
My love, please,
Tu figura y el viento,
Your figure in the wind,
is all I can see,
Drawing love letters in the sand
Meant only for you to see,
Before the ocean moves her tide
To wash us and sands clean;
```~~~… … …~~~```
Somewhere hard to find,
Finding how tomorrow changes,
Changing everything, if I could
Could only have the other half of you,
`~,,~`
Mí vida, por favor,
My love, please,
Tu figura y el viento,
Your figure in the wind,
is all I can see,
Drawing love letters in the sand
Meant only for you to see,
Before the ocean moves her tide
To wash us and sands clean;
```~~~… … …~~~```
Published 26th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Messing around with mirror / shadow writing. Where the last word of the line, has to be the first word used in the next line... thec second part is a seperate write that for somereason, threw on there on the end...
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26th Apr 2024 10:45am
26th Apr 2024 10:48am
Very cool. I thought it was beautiful.
I've never tried mirrored writing, I like it.
I've never tried mirrored writing, I like it.
27th Apr 2024 9:08pm
Like a few musical artists I enjoy, I very much appreciate the weaving of Spanish in with the English. I also appreciate the title!
27th Apr 2024 9:12pm
I will do my best for you guys I always have I'm awake thinking I owed something to my favorite brother then awakening further knowing you all are here suffering to..
30th Apr 2024 6:02am
Love can be sweet and suffering mixed. The last line shows that love can be purified.
Thank you for sharing this write.
Jasmine
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Thank you for sharing this write.
Jasmine
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