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Somebody out there
Somebody borrow me some thoughts
I am tired of my old repetitive cries
I feel old
And stupid
Are you travelling
Does he burn for you
Are you ambitious and want to conquer the world
Can I borrow your thoughts
Because I am tired of this scorn and mourn
And I have white hair and wrinkles.
I am tired of my old repetitive cries
I feel old
And stupid
Are you travelling
Does he burn for you
Are you ambitious and want to conquer the world
Can I borrow your thoughts
Because I am tired of this scorn and mourn
And I have white hair and wrinkles.
Published 25th Apr 2024
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25th Apr 2024 11:31am
Dear AM,
Being in the same boat I’m a little short on different thoughts myself. I enjoyed this poem and its convivial relatability.
I am beginning to think there are only a few actual poetic topics about which to write so we might not have to fret that much 😉
Terrific write. H🌷
Being in the same boat I’m a little short on different thoughts myself. I enjoyed this poem and its convivial relatability.
I am beginning to think there are only a few actual poetic topics about which to write so we might not have to fret that much 😉
Terrific write. H🌷
25th Apr 2024 11:37am
Thank you dear. I appreciate your words. They are nice and warm to me. It is tiresome sometimes to live with the self. Hugs and love.
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26th Apr 2024 12:03pm
Thank you dear Richard. What nice and heartwarming words. A bright day for you today.
