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How many places
How many places did we fuck?
How many ?
What is up??
Started by the door
Jumped on for the ride
Moved to the floor
Barely inside
If bases were called
And the ball was hit
You were on third
For quite a bit
We made it to the couch
God help me I do not recall how
What I do recall
Is the reverse cowgirl style?
Then you stood
My hands on the floor
Wait a minute.
No let's keep going I thought there was one more
There were hands on my breast
A table face was pressed
a bed
A turn
legs spread
It was hot
Wet and a slip
Yah I fell
But got back on the dick
I trembled
I jerked
I yelled
I creamed
I woke up
And it looked like a crime
Scene
How many places?
It was six.
I think ?
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Re. How many places
24th Apr 2024 9:35pm
Are you making an audio for this?! I don’t think I’ll last past “wait a minute “
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Re. How many places
24th Apr 2024 9:38pm
Yes, there can be those unmemorable night that you just can't forget. Tight work Lady
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24th Apr 2024 9:40pm
Re. How many places
Anonymous
24th Apr 2024 9:51pm
Ahhhh, brings back so many memories :)
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Do you recall 🤔? Oh you can hear my voice now. I put the link under th bedtime poem. Thank you Fia xoxo
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2024 10:03pm
Oops, got lost in my memories😂
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24th Apr 2024 10:26pm
Re. How many places
24th Apr 2024 10:47pm
There are too many good lines in this to pick one. lol The participants are certainly horny and up for a night of fun. :)
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24th Apr 2024 10:51pm
Re. How many places
Title is quite a draw, my curiosity led me wanting to see 'how many places' in what sense? In this case it is in the course of one visit, in which case the place would look 'like a crime scene' after all this!
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That would be quite a poem to do an audio of, with some bumpings alongside the words read!
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That would be quite a poem to do an audio of, with some bumpings alongside the words read!
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25th Apr 2024 12:01pm
Re. How many places
25th Apr 2024 12:01pm
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25th Apr 2024 12:04pm
Re. How many places
25th Apr 2024 8:58pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 👍 you had my absolute attention at reverse cowgirl!!
Excellent 👌 musing queen 👸 👏 🙌!!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤ 💙
Excellent 👌 musing queen 👸 👏 🙌!!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤ 💙
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25th Apr 2024 9:02pm
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