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I see
My day, your day,
Damn everyone’s day
starts off the same exact way.
With eye’s wide open.
The only difference is what you see
When things come into focus.
What I see,
what I wish I can unsee
causes all thoughts and comprehension to pause.
Like my brain, this supercomputer of mine just freezes, due to a system glitch.
The problem is I am not a computer, and the glitch comes from existing.
Damn everyone’s day
starts off the same exact way.
With eye’s wide open.
The only difference is what you see
When things come into focus.
What I see,
what I wish I can unsee
causes all thoughts and comprehension to pause.
Like my brain, this supercomputer of mine just freezes, due to a system glitch.
The problem is I am not a computer, and the glitch comes from existing.
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Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 5:02pm
Yes … I see… different … good you exist or I would have frozen to death… perfectly different
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Re: Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 5:04pm
Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 5:08pm
Good job. I really enjoyed how you put this feeling to words. I know it well. Perspective and perception hand in hand make up our reality. You expressed that well. Thank you for sharing.
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Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 5:38pm
Life does throw us curveballs we've got to avoid or catch. I know where you're coming from. That's a good way of describing it.
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Re: Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 6:24pm
Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 11:44pm
We should all try much harder not to hurt one another. Me included! I wish I could ignore perceived insults but the trouble is, I'm not in a good place at the moment & still take most things far too personally when, really, I should just... remind myself that I am the greatest! Dear oh dear! 🙄
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Re: Re. I see
23rd Apr 2024 11:52pm
Re. I see
24th Apr 2024 3:20am
Are we not the original computer and some of us have glitches from birth, data is lost or corrupted, viruses non friends invades our systems. We stepped off base just to say tight work Lady.
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Re: Re. I see
24th Apr 2024 3:22am
Re. I see
25th Apr 2024 8:41pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 queen and so true 👍 this reminds me of a poem I wrote 2!!
About the brain 🧠 except I never posted it!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
About the brain 🧠 except I never posted it!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re: Re. I see
25th Apr 2024 8:42pm
Re: Re. I see
27th Apr 2024 6:41pm
Ok 👌 maybe I will thanks for the encouragement 😊!!
Peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 queen 👸!!
Peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 queen 👸!!
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