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"Who's Sorry Now"
In the intimacy of my mahogany, I felt her cold
shadow alluring before my pale eyes. Touching my
arms which lay akimbo. Dripping stalactites of
death's forever. Whispering a seductive decoy of
odorous decadent breath. Echoing, "Who's sorry
now." Dropping a coin into the Wurlitzer.
shadow alluring before my pale eyes. Touching my
arms which lay akimbo. Dripping stalactites of
death's forever. Whispering a seductive decoy of
odorous decadent breath. Echoing, "Who's sorry
now." Dropping a coin into the Wurlitzer.
Published 21st Apr 2024
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21st Apr 2024 11:22pm
I'm here for the tits-out pic.
I love the arms akimbo phrase. I really love that visual.
I have always appreciated how you layer metaphoric meaning in a piece to add value. The stalactites, Wurlitzer and akimbo bits are a cool visual fusion.
I love the arms akimbo phrase. I really love that visual.
I have always appreciated how you layer metaphoric meaning in a piece to add value. The stalactites, Wurlitzer and akimbo bits are a cool visual fusion.
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In writing, I stay true to my philosophy. I write for my amusement and not the herd.
22nd Apr 2024 12:49pm
